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Andrew Lanza
ENT3003
Prof. Pryor
11/9/17

Elevator Pitch 3


1) https://youtu.be/kaWatOgXveQ 
2) I received good feedback last time regarding my pitch. My clothing was commented on, and I adjusted that, along with some dialogue, for this pitch.
3) This time around, I dressed nicer, but still casually. I spiced up the pitch with more specifics as well. 

Comments

  1. Ellliot LopatukhinNovember 12, 2017 at 5:23 PM

    I liked the shirt that you are wearing and think it looked good. Also, it is good that you were able to add more detail to your pitch while still shortening the overall length of the elevator pitch. About halfway through the pitch at about 16 seconds, you began to use your hand to help aid your pitch. I think that this added confidence and helped you look more comfortable while you were giving your pitch. Overall, good job on your pitch. It is good that you used feedback from the other elevator pitches to help aid you with this assignment.

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  2. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 6:33 PM

    You sounded very confident when giving your speech, and you memorized it well enough so that when you spoke it was very fluid and natural. And your hand gestures helped me visualize the cup holder as you were describing it. I also liked when you mentioned the patent on the adjustable grips so that it would distinguish your product from your competitors.

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  3. UnknownNovember 12, 2017 at 11:00 PM

    You did a good job with this pitch. You talked very clearly and not too fast so you were able to be understood. You also used your hands to help emphasize points you were making. This made you come across as more confident and would encourage people to buy your product.

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