17a
Andrew Lanza
ENT3003
Prof. Pryor
10/20/17
ENT3003
Prof. Pryor
10/20/17
Elevator Pitch 2
1) https://youtu.be/uhM_AEEbdOg
2) I thought that from my feedback from last time, I was able to speak more fluidly in this recording. My product still doesn't have the in -depth information specifics that I might hope for, but i'm no engineer.
3) Like I said, I think I spoke more fluidly this time. I didn't dress as nicely, which might be considered a drawback, but it really helped me feel casual and comfortable pitching.
Hi Andrew,
ReplyDeleteI agree that you spoke very fluidly throughout your pitch. I found your pitch effective and easy-to-follow and I also liked the hand gestures you used. It'll be interesting to see what in-depth information you will add for your next pitch. And while I still dressed up, I did go for the more casual look because it was what I preferred.